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Documents
written for print do not work well on the screen. The web
is a different medium and 'readers' respond differently to
it. Print documents need to be changed to reflect this.
More details...
Below
is an example of text from a company brochure which was then
rewritten for their website:
Original
brochure copy:
'Through
our ‘ICT team ’ concept, we enable our consultants to quickly
feel part of a close-knit group of specialists who openly
work together openly and share experiences in order to achieve
the best results for our projects. As a result, each team
member benefits and grows by learning through from the more
experienced team members. Each team member also grows from
the close and lasting friendships that are formed.In addition,
ICT develops its teams through the regular ICT seminars
where pertinant topics are presented and discussed to ensure
the growth and understanding of all consultants.'
Rewritten
website copy:
'We
recognise the need to invest in our consultants’ professional
growth and development. Our unique ICT team concept will
- welcome
you into a close-knit group of specialists who work together
openly and share experiences
- allow
you to benefit and grow by learning from more experienced
colleagues
- encourage
you to take part in regular seminars where pertinent topics
are presented and discussed
Contact
us and become an ICT-World consultant for both challenge
and continuing professional development!'
For
further information, or a quotation, please contact
us.
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